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Skin so pale and so innocent; yet warm and soft.
Bright is her eyes, always lit by day or by night.
Her warm embrace; like a maiden of the heavens taking the late life of a man.
The way I feel with her, is a way I have so little felt;
Tis love! The bittersweet fruit that drives an able bodied person;
To the very end of their sanity or to their discovery of true happiness!
Oh god who art in heaven, why must I love!
For she the vile woman that fate has bestowed upon my desires;
Feels not the same as I.
OH NO! I LIKE SOMEONE!
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TallTalesOfRodcairn Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it a lot. Your style is distinctive and your use of "bigger" words made a very nice read! Well done my friend
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EchoInTheVoid Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you for reading and I am very glad you liked it! And thank you for the watch !
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poeknowsprose Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
This was well written and flowed nicely. I also liked your use of the word tis. Well done!
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sparkle-lei Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
This is how I am always trying to get my poetry to turn out; I always find a kink in the rhythm! How do you do it?
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bluerosefantasy Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Artist
Beautiful!
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nomnomnoodlez Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
D'aww~~
THATS JUST
JUST SO
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EchoInTheVoid Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Writer
XD thank you!
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nomnomnoodlez Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your Welcome |D
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Aqua-Breeze Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwwww!!! :hug:
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Fraisierdepines3 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student General Artist
aww this is so sad :huggle:
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LillithOssgoodSorrow Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This poem really pulled me in.
p.s your description is fantastic!
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EchoInTheVoid Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Writer
XD thank you very much!
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LillithOssgoodSorrow Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This poem really pulled me in.
p.s your description is fantastic!
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RadiantlyIsrael Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
this is honestly amazing!most people write poems like of a girl that doesnt feel the same way as the other person.but what you wrote just took my heart in captivity and i could hear and feel the voice and the heart of the person.i just felt each word.not just the desire of the person but that she doesnt feel the same.you have an extreme talent!
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EchoInTheVoid Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Writer
Wow thank you very much! That's the first I've heard such a compliment ever, thank you very much :)
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Flowers17 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Awesome! I found a lot of myself on it...
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EchoInTheVoid Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Writer
Glad you liked :)
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