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Skin so pale and so innocent; yet warm and soft.
Bright is her eyes, always lit by day or by night.
Her warm embrace; like a maiden of the heavens taking the late life of a man.
The way I feel with her, is a way I have so little felt;
Tis love! The bittersweet fruit that drives an able bodied person;
To the very end of their sanity or to their discovery of true happiness!
Oh god who art in heaven, why must I love!
For she the vile woman that fate has bestowed upon my desires;
Feels not the same as I.
OH NO! I LIKE SOMEONE!
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TallTalesOfRodcairn Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it a lot. Your style is distinctive and your use of "bigger" words made a very nice read! Well done my friend
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EchoInTheVoid Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you for reading and I am very glad you liked it! And thank you for the watch !
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poeknowsprose Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
This was well written and flowed nicely. I also liked your use of the word tis. Well done!
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sparkle-lei Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
This is how I am always trying to get my poetry to turn out; I always find a kink in the rhythm! How do you do it?
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bluerosefantasy Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Artist
Beautiful!
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nomnomnoodlez Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
D'aww~~
THATS JUST
JUST SO
:iconletmehugyouplz:
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EchoInTheVoid Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Writer
XD thank you!
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nomnomnoodlez Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your Welcome |D
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Aqua-Breeze Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwwww!!! :hug:
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Fraisierdepines3 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student General Artist
aww this is so sad :huggle:
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