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I dreamed last night, dear,
That I held you in my arms,
But the dream ended;
Like rain my haggard eyes wept.
I must accept you are gone.
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:icondemonrobber:
Sometimes dreams come true but reality often fails to match our hopes. Nicely done.
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~sleepy-kisses Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is beautiful. It reminds me of part of the song "Reach" by The Butterfly Effect. It goes like this: "Last night I dreamt I held you with me, close enough to feel you breathe / When I awoke I lay here empty, caught between the want and need."
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~TheDarknessKitten Mar 15, 2013  New member Hobbyist Writer
It's nice. In my personal opinion it could use a bit more 'meat' on the poem. ;)
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:iconeredev:
Sad, but beautiful
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~WaffleGamer Mar 1, 2013  New member Student Writer
very moving
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